Reflection Paper I (Your Own Topic)

It has been a month or so since you all began this writing class.  Responding to all your in-class written feedback, grammar errors are also one of my major concerns.  But all I focused on for the past weeks is your writing organization, e.g,  writing a clear topic sentence, well-organized supporting sentences and powerful concluding sentences.  I’ll be moving on to editing your writing in the near future by means of peer editing and conference discussions. Another comment you had for me is typing errors on the thesaurus list. I regret causing you a bit confusion. I will be careful with them.  On top of that, reflection is a learning process of achieving excellence. Correcting mistakes and practicing the right way will carry us to a higher level.

20 responses to “Reflection Paper I (Your Own Topic)”

  1. Pets are good companions for older people. Every family has a pet in house.In present society,For the family,people have to go out to work for the money,children have to go to school,so older man will be leave at home with the pets,if you raise a dog at home,it will take care of older man and stay with them,if you raise a cat,it will make it best to please them,sometimes if older people get hurt or accidents,the pets will call for help and save their lifes,so pets are good companions for older people.

  2. After a month of writing class, I think my writing ability has made a big progress. I can finish an integral article in a short time. And I have learned so many vocabularies. I certainly feel it is very useful about writing. In addition, I also learned a lot of writing skills in this class. It’s really helpful to writing article. I really hope teacher can give us some suggestions about the article we wrote. And write down it immediately on the paper that we handed in. Then we will get it in the next time, and know what problem we have. I think it is a good way for us to develop our writing capacity. At last, thanks for your teaching.

  3. It almost about two months that I left my home and moved to Taipei. At first day, I was very scared because of that I never live alone before. So at that night, I did not sleep well and I was very missed my home. After few days ago, I told myself that “ I must grow up, so I should get used to live alone!”. Now, I am very glad to enjoy my university life, and I make some friends from my class. Even though I might get a homesickness sometimes, I will told myself “Next week or this Friday I can go home ”. So, now I am very happy at home to doing my “reflecting paper”. And I hope everyone are also happy like me now.

  4. I think it is helpful to have tests of vocabularies in writing class. But maybe we can recite some phrases as well. Besides, since the first class, we have learned about topic sentences, supporting sentences and so on. In fact, I do not feel I have progress in my writing a lot. Perhaps it need more time.

  5. A first day is always impressed. Some funny things will happen. Almost people are nervous to have a first date with someone. They will do funny things or make many mistakes in front of someone. Beside, they will remember it forever. By the way, some lovers want to let each other have a romantic memory of their first date, so they will make everything ready before they start the date. For example, boys always make a reservation in a high-class restaurant and prepare wine, candles, flowers, and a card on the table. Girls will be impressed and touched of that. So, a first date always let people remember it forever.

  6. There is a terrible teacher in my elementary school. She is very stringent. Everyday we have a lot of homework to do. Sometimes I have to write it until eleven o’clock p.m. The homework should have the sign of parents. If we miss anyone of them, she would get mad and throw it to the floor or use the book to hit our head. When we got worse grades, she would yell to us and say something like “you are so stupid.” Some of us cried immediately at that time. But it made her more anger. Fortunately, she just taught us for one year.

  7. No travel without losing something you do not want to. If I had money and time, I would definitely get a bit far away place. No, to be honest even if I do not afford, I still want to go. Then it becomes a one of my miserable episodes later anyway, but that is still the attraction. Because the travels taught me preparing enough money could making myself more comfortable. Time is the same, we should better just have a simple plan, unless you are a superman. Are you in a dilemma? Here,I am telling you; travel takes you some lisks but more often we can get something new.

  8. When I was in senior high school,the teacher who taught me math was terrible. He didn’t teach me how to use formula and just memorize it. So,I didn’t do well in all my math tests. Sometimes he was in low spirit, and he did not want to teach;therefore,I should studied by myself. Instead of this, he often talked about the politics in the class. Many classmates went to the cream school to increase their math,and I was, too.Thanks to in my second grade, I had a new math teacher who very different from former completely.If I had a terrible teacher again,I would have given up my math.

  9. She is a terrible teacher in my junior high school. First, when she teaches students in her class, she can’t accept anyone talking. If someone does, she will scold very loudly and give a lot of extra homework to them. Second, she’s standard for her students is so high, because she thinks that it will progress in their studies. I remember that if somebody doesn’t get the score up eighty-five, she also gives them extra assignment and punish them. At last, she comands everyone to hand in a report which inculding 5000 words before the system end. She is so strict that her students all study dard.

  10. Pets are good friends for many people. Modern times, contact between people and people is more and more fewer and commercial. So, if people are above water, they may have a pet like dog, cat or rabbet that can keep them company, play with them and let them feel relax. When I was a high school student, my pet Little Dodo which is an adorable rabbet makes me very happy when I was playing with her. So, pets always become good friends and spiritual balms for many people.

  11. The new term begins it has been already more one month up till mow . I learned many things from the class, include how to writing, and how to make an article have focal point . And we also learned a lot of things beyong the classroom. Because the top sentence is the most important things in the article , we speat a lot of time on it . After every class, teacher always gives us some ideal about our life to let us writing some article to express it and practice our writing skill then read and write something on a report . I think everybody looks forward to course the next time very much and me too.

  12. We have taken thise writeng course for one month.I have learnd some writing skill such as writing form,topic sentence and supporting sentences,etc.At every class we have a quiz which let me know words’ synonyms and antonyms and expend my quantity of keywords.And we also have homework.However,I need a correction when I finish my homework or I don’t know where I was wrong and won’t get progress.Besides,I want learn some rhetoric,I think it will let my composition become better.Those are some of my sugesstions.Anyhow,thanks for your teaching.

  13. I like the songs that teacher recomended.They can teach me a lot of the foreign cultures.And I enjoy the melody of them.Every vocabulary exams can let me learne more about synonyms and antonyms.But sometimes,there are some wrong words in the handouts,I can’t read them clearly.I think that I don’t study hard enough,so I feel my writing skill doesn’t improve.To sum up,I should study harder and enjoy the writing class.

  14. To me pet is necessary. Because pet can comfort our mind that make us feel peace. This year my family had a new company, a lovely dog. We called him 阿醜in Taiwanese. He is such a bright dog that I have never seen. He was a street dog but we kept him. Why I say that he is a smart dog? The reason is that we didn’t have to train him about the rules of my family. He just knows that what is to be allowed and what’s not to be allowed. Also he can take a walk alone. Without our companion he can play all the things he wants. When someone in my family has a low spirit he will make someone happy in a short time. It is amazing that I always have a good mood because him. I love him very much. I miss him so much now.

  15. Traveling to a foreign country teaches people a lot. For example, we should know how to deal with the problem by ourselves. When we are alone, we will screw up our courage to do everything. We can’t rely on anyone else. And we also can prove the fact that we learn from our text books. Besides, we can go to different countries and know their customs. It can let us relax and enjoy. We also can practice English that we learn from school with foreigners. Most of all, when we have experiences to travel, maybe next time we can be someone’s tour guide and take them to travel. How fun it is!

  16. I remember that I had a terrible teacher in my senior high school.He taught Geography.He always made a summary about every lesson and painted the emphasis.It sounds great.However,in my class,many people were considering this way which couldn’t help us learn new things any more.And,our class often could get good average grade in every exam.But,numerous people thought those grades which were strived by themselves. Furthermore, he sometimes reviewed those test paper which seemed to explain lightly.Since most of us still couldn’t understand why it was true or wrong.To sum up,he was left a bad memory by ourselves.

  17. Travel to a foreign country teaches people a lot in life. For instance , my roommate , Ivy, went abroad to study for when she was ten years old. She was so young at that time, but she had to find her way to live. Even she was strange to the new environment at first. Step by step , she knew the local culture from her daily life. In the process of her study, she not only learned many things but also broadened her horizons in America. She became more independent and courageous after went abroad for a year. Everyone should travel once at least in life.

  18. Hi!
    Without taking into account the issue of establishing a stone by God, which he won’t be able to pick up, how do you think, may be something in this world, what can God never see?

  19. I’am sorry for posting this message i’ve just took a ploit LSD(bycicle drawed..), and realized that all troubles of humanity from lack of Love.
    Please love and forgive yourself and your brothers and sisters. We are just on love.
    i would ike to recommend you a book which can give good psychological mood-up: http://www.amazon.ca/You-Can-Heal-Your-Life/dp/1561706280
    Sorry for flooding and offtopic, you can just delete this message, if you’ve read it, the mission is done…

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