A good description is to show the part of your world physically and emotionally, the scenes you see and imagine, the tastes, the smells, and the sensations you feel. As you cruised the campus this morning, pick a topic which is the corner or place at school you’d like to describe to your readers. Start with a general feeling of the topic as the topic sentence. Then continue with explanations of each of the senses you’ve chosen to use. Connect each of the senses to your main idea. Be sure to follow a logical order while explaining ideas. Don’t forget to use you heart, that is your strong feeling or impression. Lastly, restate your main idea in a different manner.
TJ Gong
Walking With Him Until I Am Not
Descriptive Paragraphs (A Corner at Shih Chien)
17 responses to “Descriptive Paragraphs (A Corner at Shih Chien)”
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There is very
dirtyand it(?) always seemsathick dust on the floor. There are some daubs on the wall. Some of them are interesting but some are scaring. Some ( ) boards on the floor but I don’t know what the(their) functions is(?), and it seemsatthere for a long time. The air (in) there is always full of smoke. And a lot of cigarette butts werebeenlittered everywhere. Sometimes there is also a smell like paint, because some students doing their works there.1. The place you described wouldn’t be nice to visit, but where is it?
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I am introducing my favourite bridge which connects the building(s) C and D. It is
very,in the evening. Since then, it has been my secret corner in the school. Around the buidings are lit up with pleasant, and not to be too bright light from the basketball court. Some students are playing in the court while the others are chatting lively. When gentle breeze goes through the silent passage, it always makes me composed. I feel as if I were in a Gogh’s picture. After sunset, the school has a very different faceto the oneas we know in daytime. It is marvellous to (go) across the bridge enjoying the view and seasonable weather.1. Indeed, the bridge provides USC students with a fantastic view of the campus.
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It was fun to stay my favorite places at Shih Chien. That is the foot bridge on the third floor between building A and building L where people can look down others walking. First of all, I love looking others are busy for their classes or homework whenever I have free time relaxing myself. By that, I cherish more my time to take a break and then plan well on my next jobs. Besides, I always enjoy breezes there because it lets me become more spirited. In addition, from the angle the view is more magnificent and nice. It was superb to find out where I can loosen my worries.
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My favorite place in Shih Chien is the building A. It is very creative and it has design features for force. It is the most tallest building in our school, at first floor, there are usually displayed some works from design department. And other floors are filled with classrooms. I most like the 7 floor, there are many workrooms for design department or construction department. Looking them from outside on night is very beautiful and for me is very touched because I also want to in there. Because the building is filled with the atmosphere of art, I most like it in Shih Chien.
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The front door is my favorite place at Shih Chien. Standing in front of here, I can find that how artistic this campus is. I can see the students who not only are about to go to classes with smile faces or drowsy eyes but also are ready to leave school. When I see that, I can guest what they will do or what they did in the school, it’s quite funny. In the evening, I can see the beautiful lighting. The sky also mixes with black, orange and blue, becoming amazing scenery. That’s my favorite corner at Shih Chien which I can relax myself so much.
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The favorite place in Shih Chien is the place between building H and building L.It is a plaza that with many interesting things.In the morning,you can eat your breakfast in the plaza,while there will have sunshin and birds singing,it’s really marvelous.In the midday sometimes there will held some activity that you can watch it.In the night,it will be a good place to walk and talk with friends.It’s really good.That’s the reason why it will be the favorite place I like
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It’s a good place to eat lunch, to chat with friends, or to take a break. This place is in front of building H. There are a lot of tables and wooden benches. In a sunny day, while sitting in there and being fanned by breeze, I feel comfortable. The worries are also cleared off. In there, I can observe crowds of people who pass through the road as well. In the night, I can sit with a peace mind and see numerous stars in the sky. It’s so wonderful sight. My mood is always changed by the sights around me. It’s really a nice place to relax for me.
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A Corner at Shih Chien
When I go to the library from the dormitory, there is a road where I pass through that makes me calm. I am fond of walking alone and looking around the roadside. On the right side, there are building E and D standing. I often smell sweet food from the building E because it is a kitchen over there and lets students practice more. Besides, there is less voiced and the building D looks old and also has a long history. The scenery comes into my eyes is like a beautiful picture. On the other side, it is a basketball court. In the court, it often has a lot of people playing basketball or volleyball and doing exercise. The elder and younger seems vivid. Their energy encourages me to live passionately and don’t let my life colorless. Although the distance is not very long, it is the place where I walk enjoyably in campus. -
My favorite corner in Shih Chien is the first floor of the building A. We can see many shows and creative works there. Building A is also the most creative building. It’s the reason why I love it. When I walk through the building A, I feel very glad to be in the Shih Chien. At night, the building A is lighted up. It looks splendid and remarkable. It’s represented the outstanding achievements of our school. I love to stay in the building A very much.
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The building A at Shih Chien is my favorite place. I like the structure of building A. When I saw it at first time, I felt its semblance was so special. It was looked very creative. The building A is used for designing section the most. I think that is the reason why it always make me feel the air is full of artistic quality. There are many artistic productions exhibitions at the plaza. Every time I see the display, I can see the originality of our university. The A building is really a good place for everyone to go.
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I think the most special place at Shih Chien is the building A. The wall of it is erected by cement. The color of it is dark gray and with well-regulated little black holes. There are wide steps and aerial ceiling above the plaza. It brings people wide and fashionable feeling. The classroom of building A is also beautiful. At one side classrooms have big French windows. Students sit on their seats can look outside to see the lawn, buildings and green mountains from it. If the weather is good, the blue sky could make the scene more attractive. Moreover, the yellow lights, dark gray checked walls and blue blackboards make the classrooms have good quality feel. With such a beautiful scene, I always have good mood in the building A class rooms when I have classes there.
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My favorite place at Shin Chien University is library. Due to three reasons, first, it’s the building that is very special. It has many French windows, and it can let the sun shine full in the library. Second, the surrounding is very quiet. It is a good place for me to study or read books. Third, if you wonder about where you can find a great place to take a nap.
The library is the best place to choice. Its quiet, not too crowd, and free to use. And the most important reason is everyone can go to the library. -
My favorite place in Shih Chien is 楓葉廣場. Because it is a free place for me to do any thing I want. I can eat meal there or chat and laugh loud there, too. Also I can read something I am interesting in. But, most time I stay there I often observe people what they are doing at that time. 楓葉廣場is a place where I can breathe easily. That’s why I like it most in this university.
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Rukai museum is a interesting place at Shih Chien university. You can see it when you walk through the H building and then turn right. It is a place which has Rukai’s house, totem and some special decorate about the Rukai. All of their building seems construct by wood and rock that make me feel comfortable when I see the place. All of the building construct on campus so that when I stay by the place, I can scent of the wind. I like nature and that why I like this place. It always let me feel peaceful.
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Dormitory is my favorite place at Shih Chien. It’s a building that I live in everyday. It just likes my second home. Even though it is a little old, but it still very firm. It protects me from wind and rain. I love staying in the room and looking out the windows. I can see building F, concert hall, swimming pool, basketball court, and building E. Sometimes I can hear music from building F and even hear cheers from basketball court. Even though I am not there, I still can imagine that I am with those people. Sometimes I can rest or do whatever I want. It’s a great place for me.
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There is one place on Shih-Chien’s campus I do prefer, it’s the loft of Building H. I remembered that when I had finished studying with classmates,we decided to go there for fun. We took the elevator to the sixth floor and it was so dark at that time, in fact,fear and darkness stroke us .Despite of fear ,we just rushed out of the elevator toward the place with some light,it was the loft. We didn’t know how beautiful Shih-Chien is until beautiful views entered our eyes.We enjoyed the soft wind and brought some snack to share with each other.Afterwards, the loft of Building H is the secret among us . All in all, I really love this place and so do my friends.
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I feel like I’ve seen this page earlier on , but upon taking a while on here it’s clear that
this is a new web page. Still, I’m gonna bookmark this blog and begin following it regularly.
TJ Gong 
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